You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you or would you rather choose your own room? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Despite the difficulties having a roommate may cause, I personally would like to share my room with another person. The reasons why I support having roommate is discussed in the following passage.
Firstly, sharing a room with another person helps students bond with other people. In fact, university students are mostly involved with their assignments and projects and they rarely have sufficient time to spend with their friends or classmates. Interestingly, having a roommate would be a good opportunity for them to communicate with other people with different levels of experience and knowledge. Not only this, they can learn from each other whether directly when they talk with each other or indirectly when they see distinctive lifestyle of their roommate. For example, last semester, although I was so busy with my projects, my roommate and I frequently shared our own experiences and memories when we came back from university. Not only was it a good opportunity to learn more about our cultures, but also we were able to help each other with our problems in our studies.
Furthermore, sharing a room with roommate is a good way to save time. Certainly, it would be time-consuming for a university student to take on all responsibilities of managing a room, from cleaning the place to paying the bills. However, when people have roommate, the workload is shared between the residents so they would find it beneficial to do more in less time. For instance, in busy times of the end of the semester, it is quite likely for both students to finish the house chores in a shorter time period to save their time for studying and doing class assignment.
Finally, another good reason why I prefer having a roommate rather than to be alone is that it would be more interesting. Unfortunately, almost all students complained of the hectic days they have on campus. Nonetheless, spending some time with a roommate telling jokes or watching comics refreshes your mind after a drained day. In other words, a considerate roommate is serious on his or her studies, but is well aware that joy and excitement is an integral part of the life. For example, my roommate and I scheduled to have some time together playing guitar and violin in the evenings. Therefore, we had lots of fun that made our mind free so we could do a better job when it was the time to do our homework.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I definitely believe that having a roommate is a great idea to communicate with other adults, save more time and have lots of fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in fact', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221991701245 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.151452282158 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0809128630705 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0580912863071 0.046263068375 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0850622406639 0.0685040099705 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118257261411 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0414937759336 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.788533978 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0311203319502 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0933609958506 0.0887237588012 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165975103734 0.0209618222197 79% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145228215768 0.0139019557991 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2561.0 2387.08602151 107% => OK
No of words: 437.0 408.028673835 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86041189931 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322654462243 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25171624714 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199084668192 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112128146453 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.788533978 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505720823799 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.2061157206 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3042697213 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.789473684 120.699889404 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.5533526081 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.171624714 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.29577464789 1.45489161554 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231289183332 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.090112699346 0.103427244359 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0541942200413 0.0752933317313 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526512229083 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169787457992 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935971331736 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432086741103 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.283408755096 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10107424011 0.067059652881 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145376627815 0.210909579961 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326061837009 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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