The community that we live there, have an essential part in our life. Every positive attempt effect on that's advance and progress. If I have an opportunity to develop my community I prefer to work in children's education for two important reasons.
First, education of children guarantees the future of our community. For example, when I went to school in elementary school there weren't any Institue of development of children's talent and we couldn't estimate out intelligence, because of that, I think to establish such same institute certainly help to the development of children and final our community.
Second, talented children make our community more efficient, For example, in a developed community, individuals from childhood learn how to face the problem and how to solve complex problems themselves.
In sum, I think to invest in children has a very important and prominent effect on the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 1977.66487455 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 146.0 407.700716846 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 4.48103885553 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99456096678 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 212.727598566 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 618.680645161 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9135409089 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0479960527837 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277475499429 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377987282591 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0302503701205 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037795635611 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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