You have enough money to purchase either a house a business

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You have enough money to purchase either a house a business

Money, one of the valuable item, leads to the person to buy a material that seeks by him/her—except a emotion and feelings. All the materialistic things in the world can be purchase by these. However, on giving me choices—either buy a house or a business, I will choose to purchasing of business. I feel this way for the several reasons, which explores in the following essays.

First of all, by the help of a money, we can invest it in a certain type of busing. As investment is the process of excess return as compared to our purchase. This will creates a more and more money. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. After my graduation, I have five-thousand dollar which was given by my parents to me. I have a lots of option for it’s uses. Finally, I have invest it to cotton industry. Everything was going right in my business. After two year, I can return all my investment—as I have different machinaries in my cotton factory which seems like a profit for mine. In this case, if unfortunately, I have spend my money to purchase a house, I am not able to do a such progress. Morever, in coming years, it would be a more profit to me. Finally, I would be able to buy many things: new investment, houses and along with every necessities of my family.

Secondly, when money was invested in business, it can brings a person to be employee or a facilitiated with certain types of job. If person became a jobless or without any work, then he/she will become dull or lazy. For instances, one of my friend has recently started his business life. After this, he gets involved in it. He goes to the office at early morning, and return at the night. Initially, he was not so creative when he has not any jobs. After started a business, he should have to use the mental work during his office, and thus he became highly intelligent after sharpening of his mind. This business has changed him drastically rather sitting in the house vegetatively. Morever, this business helps him to run his daily basic needs of his family, and he was able to maintain a good life.

In conclusion, I am of the opinion that I prefer to purchase a business rather than a house because it was an investment which would later provides more returns in my future, and because it helps to maintain a good life in the society with capability of thinking.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a material that seeks by him/her—except a emotion and feelings. All the materiali...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
... as compared to our purchase. This will creates a more and more money. My personal expe...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...h was given by my parents to me. I have a lots of option for it's uses. Finally, ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
...ion for it's uses. Finally, I have invest it to cotton industry. Everything was g...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... In this case, if unfortunately, I have spend my money to purchase a house, I am not ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
... money was invested in business, it can brings a person to be employee or a facilitiat...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55058823529 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82344705762 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501176470588 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1556813547 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3846153846 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3461538462 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188618406817 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503744731585 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497529705243 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119091049503 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262352888796 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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