You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
Visiting a foreign country is an occasion that many people really enjoy. Different people would prefer a different country for their holiday. Personally, it is the America that I would love to go to if I had the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I can visit my relatives in the US and there are lots of Vietnamese people, my fellow countryman there. The US is a big country with a notable diversity in cultures and everybody wants to go there to realize the so-called American dreams. My family is not an exception. My grandparents, my uncles’ families has have been living there for a long time and there is only my family here in Vietnam because father works here. Consequently, my visit to the US is the chance for my whole extended family to reunite and have a memorable time together. For example, every year in the summer, I and my parents go for a trip to visit our relatives in California in the US. After months of not seeing each other, I am always glad to see my grandparents and relatives. They take me to many interesting places such as the Disneyland, the Universal Studio. In addition, they also take me to the Little Saigon, which is the biggest community of Vietnamese people in the US, and I get to know many people there. Since there are so many places to go so I wouldn’t waste any day of the two weeks doing nothing. I have a lot of unforgettable memory there.
Furthermore, when I go the US, I’m able to visit different universities to have a more in-depth look at the decision of which one I want to spend my four years of college. America has one of the best education in the whole world. There are many renown and honourable universities locating in the US like Havard or Stanford University. It’s a dream for everyone, including me, to study in the US. If I had a chance to go to the universities by myself, it would be much better than just looking for the information on the internet. For instance, many universities and colleges in the US require the applicants to know the reason to choose that specific university. There is no better way to answer that question than to go on an excursion to the exact university.
In conclusion, I would love to go to the US if I had the chance to visit a foreign country for two weeks. This is because I can visit many of my relatives there and I would be able to visit the universities in the US that I want to choose to apply. I believe that I would have a great time there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21113243762 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.145873320537 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.084452975048 0.0866891130778 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.042226487524 0.046263068375 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0806142034549 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109404990403 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0172744721689 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72492840269 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0595009596929 0.0309702414327 192% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.109404990403 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172744721689 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00767754318618 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2608.0 2387.08602151 109% => OK
No of words: 476.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47899159664 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289915966387 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201680672269 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105042016807 0.112833075102 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72492840269 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432773109244 0.524397521467 83% => OK
Word variations: 48.4029364844 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.04 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6678933128 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.32 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.2080672269 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.25714285714 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403720481173 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147550994353 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783264300866 0.0752933317313 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.507499018895 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165495570441 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162426324902 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113973693411 0.0781384742642 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.51908058258 0.336927656856 154% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.150883257201 0.067059652881 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.350230094462 0.210909579961 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682093721002 0.0618886996521 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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