You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. Even then it would not be possible to directly answer. It would depend upon the kind of lifestyle we have, educational backgrounds, individual personalities and emotional concerns as well as the situation that we are in, and so forth.
In my opinion that traveling plays a crucial role in everyone's life and career is an undeniable fact.
Should people realize the significance of traveling in their life and profession, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
These days, a good country for traveling has recently been the topic of debate among psychologist and people in our province.
I do believe that If I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, I would like to visit Canada, There are a lot of different reasons with high value that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that there are one of the green countries in all around the world. Alaska is one of the beautiful places in Canada, and I love visiting Alaska. I love its nature you know everywhere is green, and green is really soothing and relaxing for me, whenever I look at green trees and beautiful flowers there I feel refreshed.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that Niagara waterfall in Canada. as you know it is the largest waterfall in the world, and I love there, whenever I go Canada I try to go visiting there.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that Canada has a lot of universities which are suitable for studying. Some of this university have good ranking between another university, such as Toronto University. If I go Canada, I will go their university for visiting their professors for continuing my studies.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. Another country that I love to visit it is England. There is one of the beautiful countries, and their nature is really wonderful. England has a beautiful coastline. Their people are really polite. There are a lot of castles.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of Canada in traveling is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to familiar with some places in Canada for visiting, and can improve several aspects of personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... fact that Niagara waterfall in Canada. as you know it is the largest waterfall in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, second, so, then, well, as to, i feel, kind of, such as, you know, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83578947368 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.866055809 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484210526316 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2016079519 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.88 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234993321549 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054132199115 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774396820267 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903834779469 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974146308254 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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