Young people enjoy life more than older people.
Enjoying their lives is something people seek to do all over the worlds. It is possible to identify them trying to be happy through completely different ways, depending on their culture, their social references and also their age. Despite the fact that older people do have more experience, and are more likely to know better about convenient ways to act in order to achieve happyness, the truth is that young people usually live more activelly and are more worried about the present than about the future and, therefore, enjoy life more than older people do.
First of all, the fact that most youngsters are less worried about the future - and also the past, which can bring bad memories to a lot of older people - allow them to live in the moment. That makes them achieve a level of joy in a way older people are not used to anymore. A teenager student, for instance, is not as worried about his grades in high school as a college graduate is about his, who is not as concerned about his performance as an important businessman in his company.
Moreover, while young people may have less knowledge in a lot of things, the ignorance makes them think of themselves as super heroes, encouraging them to act without fear. This may not be a quality because they may suffer from their actions, but for sure, this behaviour makes them happy.
On the other hand, older people have more experience on several subjects, and are more likely to have something that will make it easier for any person to enjoy the life: money. However, they are also more vulnerable to concerns regarding their families, the future of their beloved ones and the consequences of their actions. While these concerns are important in order to warranty a good future, it prevents them from enjoying the present.
In other words, in spite of the fact that it is not unreasonable to assume that older people do have more experience and conditions to seek the pleasures of life, the fact is that the youngsters are more likely to enjoy the present moments they are living, not being concerned about the future. It may raise questions regarding the consequences of these different behaviours, but one can not deny that young people know how to enjoy their moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...ot of older people - allow them to live in the moment. That makes them achieve a level of joy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, first of all, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44272323001 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45618556701 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3041655422 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.769230769 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8461538462 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 5.45110844103 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348552551413 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125975638817 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129367733982 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207561099447 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126802854492 0.0645574589148 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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