Young people enjoy life more than older people do
These days, some people do say that young people enjoy life, while others believe that older people enjoy life more than young people do. Personally, i believe that old people enjoy life more than young people to. i feel this way for reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
However, those who argue that young people enjoy life more than old people are not entirely wrong, as a young adult in your youthful days, one is still strong, full of energy, full of vigor, and you can visit some certain places that when you get old you won't the strength to do them again. For example, activities like mountain climbing can only be done and enjoyed at a young age. Some certain sport activities like football, swimming, boat riding, among others can be enjoyed at youthful age. Young age is the best time to make friends you will spend time with when you get old.
On the other hand, first of all, old people are have all enough time for themselves. Most of them are retired and they have to no work to do and nowhere to rather than enjoying their retirement life. For example, my dad is over 70 years old, he retired from his job few years ago. All he does now is to stay at home, go on vacations. He recently came back from Jeju Island in South Korea, he spent over a month there. Jeju Island is a serene and calm place, he simply went there to enjoy himself having worked and earned money during his youthful days. My dad can travel where he wants if it's possible for him to, this what I call enjoyment, no late night works, no stress, just living your life peacefully until death come.
In addition, older people spend more time with their families and friends. During their youth, most people are occupied with work from their various jobs and hardly spend time with their families. For example, while my dad was still working, he leaves for work very early in the morning and comes back home very late in the night. Even on weekends when he is at home, he is always in his study room, he only comes out to eats and problem watch the news at 7pm in the evening. However, after his retirement, he spend a lot of time with his family, we go some vacations together when we are also on break from school and this way he enjoys his life much better.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that older people do enjoy life more than young people. This is because they have enough time for themselves and family.
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- The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent During the same year Omni showed a significant 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, while, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.421875 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01984015828 2.67179642975 76% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502232142857 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2527001331 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429828350158 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156511891345 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240284593034 0.0737576698707 326% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340646319346 0.150856017488 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249831856657 0.0645574589148 387% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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