Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
The people are always searching for the happiness in their life, in which, young people prefer to enjoy their lives more older people. From my point of views, this is undeniable fact and I will explain in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the younger people have motivation and enthusiasm because they are one who have to explore many things. On the other hand, the older are already faced with all problems and happiness in their life. Doing all the stuff at their younger ages.Therefore, they want to live their lives peacefully. Moreover, according to the eating habits of early lives, most of the older people suffer about health issues. Consequently, the bodies of them is not able to follow their mind and resting becomes their essential need. By seeing my old parents, I realised it. My parents uesed to travel a lot when I was kid because it was their hobby and enjoyment. By the time , they get age, they are not capable of travelling.
However, the young people have variety of functions to illustrate by themselves. Working too hard to find their excitement and challenges new opportunities to get as happiness. Besides, playing adventure game to analyse the level of their fear and travelling everywhere to find the pleasant and create precious moments. The youngster always try to enjoy owing to the stress from job and living standard. Drawing from my experiences, I have been working in a competitive environment. So, the most important thing for me is to live with full of happiness and without pressure. The more I feel stress, I more I try hard to possess happiness. Many of the young people will experience the ways like I do. To sum up, according to the reasons that I mentioned above, I believed that younger people spend their lives with enjoyment more than the older people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i feel, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82903225806 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65947307076 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.945237306 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7894736842 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319595644162 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913714290018 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123423160368 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249309419672 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929804404054 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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