Young people enjoy their life more than older people do.
The essay talks about who enjoys life better, young people or older people. While some people would say young people enjoy life to the fullest, others would say older people enjoy their life more than anyone. I think, older people know how to enjoy life and they do it a better way. Definition of enjoying life also varies from generation to generation.
Firstly, in today's difficult and busy world, those who can maintain the balance between work and life are rare. Younger people are too busy building their career, they do not have time to enjoy their life. With this ever-increasing competition maintaining an equilibrium between career and personal growth is being more difficult each day. Their main focus is on developing a stable lifestyle and then enjoying life, whereas older people have already gained the stability of life, so they have more time to enjoy life.
Moreover, one would think with advanced technology the time required to do quotidian tasks has lessened at a great degree, but the adverse effects of technology are not insignificant. Younger people tend to get tired sooner as compared to the indefatigable older people. The only time they have is weekends, which they prefer resting due to the tiring and long weekdays' work.
In addition to this, younger people prefer expensive and difficult ways of fun, for instance, a foreign tour, amusement parks, parties which are difficult to achieve with the vacillating income. In contrast to this, older people find easier and cheaper ways to enjoy life, such as going to a nearby park, sitting with some old friends and talking for hours, or joining some neighboring elderly group that is the definition of happiness for them.
In a nutshell, the unsynchronized factors, time, money, preferences, and perspectives make enjoyment a little more difficult for younger people than for older people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...is being more difficult each day. Their main focus is on developing a stable lifestyle and...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...Younger people tend to get tired sooner as compared to the indefatigable older peo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he definition of happiness for them. In a nutshell, the unsynchronized factors,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12377850163 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58074621711 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8326197939 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 5.45110844103 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.553999085831 0.236089414692 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208130259682 0.076458572812 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173392161209 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304556540929 0.150856017488 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.203582657982 0.0645574589148 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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