Young people now a days do not toward enough time to help their communities
We the human beings have some commitments to the society, as we take things for the betterment of ourselves and we have to give back something which is useful for others and will should start from childhood on wards. Some people believe
that now a days young generations are not helping the community and they are busy in there work . I also have the same thought and I believe this with my personal, societal and psychological views.
Personally, young people are not attracted because there is no new things that they can explore. For example, when I was young I used to do the voluntary job in our library, we can meet lot of people and most of the people will come there to take books and this will help to grow personally and professionally. The situation changed now people replace conventional books to e books which they can get from the website. This had happened in almost all areas and made the kids less attractive. Therefore, doing something for the communities become boring to the young generations.
In a societal view, now a days young people people find hard to mingle with different culture. Today,s current situation is in every community we can find different ethnic, religious groups and it is hard for the young people to get along with them . For instance, I am living in Florida and in our area there are lot of people does not know to speak English and this makes them to hesitate to give help in their communities. As a result because of the hardness in going with different groups young people did not get interested in helping the communities.
Psychologically, now a days the young adults do not have time to do the community works. They changed a lot and they want to make money as early as possible. They are taking extra courses to finish the university early and they are working more hours to make some extra hours. My nephew who is in college and working in a grocery store and have no time to do the community work. This type of behavior change made the kids to avoid working in communities.
In conclusion, the young people does not want to work in community because they feel boring and uncomfortable to get along with multiple culture and because of the change in their behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65063291139 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61201902309 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440506329114 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2578988917 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.055555556 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336624516699 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122137018303 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12044894282 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171552825505 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731534546715 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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