Young people nowadays do not give enough time to their communities
I am in my twentys, I look around myself and I do not see my friends and other people my age do not share the same empathy that a person should have. Their lives are mostly emphsized themselves, and they are being active participants of the community.
What I mean is, the young portion of the community is no longer helping in a lot of aspects of the community, for example, there is no gathering to talk about the handicaped people's rights anymore. There has been so long that university students published any sort of newspaper. It is like they do not have an opinion about anything in their community. There are other examples too, like there is no movement to stop obesety or to help the poor.
This is uncaring behavior. Our community did not used to be like this, we used to be a community that people came to each other's aid when needed. That is completely gone these days. I remember my father saying that back then when he went to college, there had been a lot of campus newletters, a lot of extra curricular activity which would benifit the community.
There was a recent study by Harvard University, It researched behaviors between people who are active, did things that were not mandetory, like stuff that beneifits the community, against people who are not active and just go about their own life. This research turned out that a signifacnt portion of the people who volunteered their life to extra curriculars, felt more happier ad fullfilled in their life.
To fix this, I believe changes should be done at every level, starting from the schools. If the children know the importance of caring about their own enviorment, they will grow up to be responsible parents. Another thing is that, if someone sees the good his or her actions do in community, they will probably be intreaged and want to be more helpfull to the community. So there should be more activities organized, and new members should always be welcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ncaring behavior. Our community did not used to be like this, we used to be a commun...
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Line 8, column 368, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...d their life to extra curriculars, felt more happier ad fullfilled in their life. To fix ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, another thing, for example, i mean, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72140762463 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60208370428 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5521163273 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171506249832 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503325423335 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504848721344 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972105461596 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380074774632 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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