Personally, in my country, there is more need for land to be left in its natural condition the reasons why I say so as follows.
Firstly, my country is one of the developing countries in the world so we are not underdeveloped one. Thus, we are building lots of concrete and steel places for industrial facilities. However, we do not consider to stay lands in their natural conditions. We should keep up the balance with nature and human. So, government and people related to this problem should take precaution. If we want our children to live in this beautiful country, we have to reserve some land for them.
Moreover, even if we want to live in a healthy place, we should know that we need more land for nature. People cannot endure without O2 and everybody conscious that it is supplied from the plants in nature not from the factories or houses. Mother nature has been existed for million years and should be prevented from humans.
Last but not least, We should not think just ourselves we need to consider other species. This world not only belongs to us but also belongs to animals and plants. As we have developed, we cannot occupy their terrains. When we invade their shelter, these animals will face to endangered for this reason natural balance will be destroyed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider staying'.
Suggestion: consider staying
...dustrial facilities. However, we do not consider to stay lands in their natural conditions. We s...
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Line 6, column 276, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ses. Mother nature has been existed for million years and should be prevented from huma...
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Line 6, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rs and should be prevented from humans. Last but not least, We should not think ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1977.66487455 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75446428571 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52708147562 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3851954083 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0714285714 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260553423979 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991629140989 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121934518311 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22527528194 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152693506634 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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