According to the reading passage, it is stated that in the near future, airships that were widely in use decades ago, will become popular again, and it mentions the advantages of airships over airplanes and helicopters to clarify this hypothesis. However, the professor in the listening section refutes the assumptions made in the reading passage and presents three solid reasons to challenge them.
Firstly, the reading claims that unlike airplanes and helicopters, airships use engine only for horizontal movement and need less fuel, which makes them cost-efficient. The professor casts doubt on this point by saying that although airships are fuel-efficient, they need special lighter gasses, such as Hydrogen and Helium to fly. He states Hydrogen gas is capable of catching fire very easily, which can result in tragic accidents. On the other hand, Helium is safer but it is more difficult to obtain and more expensive. Therefore, the professor believes finding an economical solution for this matter is not easy.
Secondly, the article posits that airships can be used in hard-to-reach locations unlike airplanes, and also can carry heavy logs unlike helicopters. In contrast, the professor says that airships need to come down to pick up the tree logs in the forest and then rise again. According to him, since airships are very large, it is very difficult to keep them steadily while there is heavy winds around, and it can cause real damages to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
According to the reading passage, it is ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...three solid reasons to challenge them. Firstly, the reading claims that unlike ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... solution for this matter is not easy. Secondly, the article posits that airshi...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are heavy winds'?
Suggestion: there are heavy winds
...y difficult to keep them steadily while there is heavy winds around, and it can cause real damages t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16455696203 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69225426197 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611814345992 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4185771947 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06452816374 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166401630867 0.272083759551 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578589626698 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507537189626 0.0662205650399 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110821541072 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050963013912 0.0443174109184 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.3589403974 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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