The author talks to us about Broccoli and the requirement of climatic conditions for its growth and the speaker explains the difference between East Coast and West Coast broccoli.
He or She believes climatic conditions for its growth are changing hence scientists are attempting to create a new type of broccoli to grow in the new conditions.
According to the author when broccoli grows on the East Coast and distributing it to nearby grocery stores. It would probably cost-efficient because of its transportation, so people can buy it for less money.
When a new type of broccoli is created, it attracts a lot of customers because they crossbreed with other similar plants to develop more desirable to consumers.
It is being created using traditional breeding techniques and also scientists use genetic modification technology to create high-quality broccoli.
Some vegetables lose their nutrients and vitamins shortly after harvest. So when broccoli is grown locally, people can eat it's after cutting.
The speaker believes that East Coast broccoli may not successful or beneficial for customers hence scientists try to create a new type of broccoli to survive more in hot summer. he mentions the broccoli has a lower yield on West Coast.
as well as scientists try to modify the broccoli but people don't trust them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: He
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Suggestion: As
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s try to modify the broccoli but people dont trust them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 214.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22897196262 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92148770336 2.5805825403 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9532355724 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06452816374 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.09492273731 195% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175119475803 0.272083759551 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724867231572 0.0996497079465 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301406068512 0.0662205650399 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826132863692 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022703498431 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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