COMICS
In the reading and the listening both were about the origin of comic, if it was classified as an American art or if it was really originate from America.
First, in the reading part, the author claim that comics are originated from America and then it spread to the whole world influencing other country like Japan in the case of Manga and Europe because of Disney comics.
But in the listening part, the man talking said that this is not true, and started first talking about the first comic strip, Hogans Alley, negating that it was the first comic strip in the world and mentioned country from Europe that first stared to create comic strip, country like England or Hungary. After this he mention about Action comic, the character Super man, saying that he was not the first character from a comic book and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book created 60 years before Super man, also he add the nationality of the creator of Super man that was Canadian to complement his argument.
In addition to this the man declare that Japanese manga were influenced maindly by traditional Asian art
Finally he answered about the Disney comic in Europe, letting us know that the Disney character were created by American but, the comic on Europe were drawn by themselves. In conclusion comics is not influenced by American at all but having origin all around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'originated'.
Suggestion: originated
... as an American art or if it was really originate from America. First, in the reading pa...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
... like England or Hungary. After this he mention about Action comic, the character Supe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngland or Hungary. After this he mention about Action comic, the character Super ...
^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Ten
...comic book and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...k and then gave the example of Ten Ten, an character from a Belgium comic book cre...
^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'adds'.
Suggestion: adds
...ated 60 years before Super man, also he add the nationality of the creator of Super...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 245.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72653061224 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28106670357 2.5805825403 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49387755102 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 21.2450331126 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4941518468 49.2860985944 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.0 110.228320801 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.8333333333 21.698381199 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06452816374 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366813242933 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207334104407 0.0996497079465 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456551343328 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190954144124 0.162205337803 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123128493445 0.0443174109184 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.498013245 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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