Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Human greed never end is rightly said. Even enough possession doses not satisfy human being, his urge of grabbing more surge after every need fulfillment. Access desire of requiring more is not good from some set of people’s point of view, However, others like me considered it a motivational factor which boast us to achieve better heights by not getting satisfy with what you already have. I think this way because satisfaction with current situation does not allow you to work hard, grow and develop consequences of it will make you stagnant and lazy.

Firstly, desire of getting better life is source of this dissatisfaction in human. And history has proven the fact that this peculiar behavior of human has evolved world in a phenomenal ways. Its mere because of humans this behavior we are cherishing today’s technology, automatic mechanism, better education and medicines all in all human’s this urge has given us immensely comfortable life. A primitive human (ape) can be very fine instance of this perception. Although ape were define as uncultured creature but he has developed himself because of this unsatisfying behavior with their current situation/ possession. He learned to be more civilized, speaking, cladding in clothes, writing and constructed this cultured human society. Therefore human demand of getting more is not unfair or new rather very competitive and healthy for our growing world.

Secondly, being not demanding or satisfied can be hindrance in our development. Just imagine what would happen if couples would have satisfied with being just married? We would not have generation of human being alive on this planet earth or may be like many other species human being would have been endangered creature on the verge of extinction. Luckily we are safe and witnessing our offspring achieve better than us. Parents could be a very fine set of example to understand the concept of not getting satisfied as their list starts the very moment they would have got married, they need kids after wedlock, now they need their kids to go to school soon and do desperately wonderful in their studies then they want them to choose lucrative job and get married soon. Cycle goes on with every married couple even today. This urge of parents has created today’s competitive world as they have produced better generation and motivated to be more competitive as it is said “every generation is smarter than the past one “. We must carry forward this to make our world better.

Before mention reasons are transparent enough to understand the importance of not satisfying with current situation/possession as this not satisfying attributes give us growth as well as develop us and this urge is beneficial for our own development.

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a motivational factor which boast us to achieve
a motivational factor which boasts us to achieve

this way because satisfaction with current situation does not allow you to work hard, grow and develop consequences of it will make you stagnant and lazy.
Description: two verbs in one sentence. can you re-write this sentence?

desire of getting better life is source of this dissatisfaction
desire of getting better life is the source of this dissatisfaction

ape were define as uncultured creature
ape is defined as an uncultured creature

human being would have been endangered creature
human being would have been the endangered creature

Before mention reasons are transparent enough to understand the importance of not satisfying with current situation/possession as this not satisfying attributes give us growth as well as develop us and this urge is beneficial for our own development.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? Don't forget punctuation marks.

Sentence: by not getting satisfy with what you already have.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to getting and satisfy

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2

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Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 12
No. of Words: 451 250
No. of Characters: 2248 1200
No. of Different Words: 242 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.608 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.617 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.55 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.57 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.468 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.179 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4