five days or four days employees
According to the reading working four days a weak instead of five days has so many beneficiary for companies, employees and society. In the lecture professor
First, according to lecture if a employee work fewer hours she or he will make fewer mistake because of having more rest time. In the lecture professor disagrees and says hiring new employees is so costly for companies because they should insure their employees and also new employees need space and computers which all of these cause companies spend more money.
Second reading says that by decreasing work hours and paying 80 percent salary to employees and hire more employees instead of paying more salary to employees who work more hours create more job for more people. In the lecture professor says companies expect their four days employees work similar to what they do in five day so no additional job will be available and those additional jobs will be unfavorable.
Finally, employees can amend their live quality by spend less time to work in steed use that for some activities such as: leisure activities, pursuing private interests which are useful for them. However in the lecture professor says four days employees have chance to advanced and in economy downtown companies prefer to conserve five days ones .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: an
...fessor First, according to lecture if a employee work fewer hours she or he wil...
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Suggestion: However,
...te interests which are useful for them. However in the lecture professor says four days...
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...panies prefer to conserve five days ones .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.302222222222 0.261695866417 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.151111111111 0.158904122519 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115555555556 0.0723426182421 160% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355555555556 0.0435111971325 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0355555555556 0.0277247811725 128% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102222222222 0.128828473217 79% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0370669169778 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47695730584 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355555555556 0.0208969081088 170% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0533333333333 0.128158765124 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222222222222 0.0158828679856 140% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222222222222 0.0114777025283 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1287.0 1645.83664459 78% => OK
No of words: 214.0 271.125827815 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01401869159 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359813084112 0.374372842146 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280373831776 0.287516216867 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182242990654 0.187439937562 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14953271028 0.113142543107 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47695730584 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.539623497131 102% => OK
Word variations: 51.0050356581 53.8517498576 95% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0529801325 54% => OK
Sentence length: 30.5714285714 21.7502111507 141% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4087079629 49.3711431718 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.857142857 132.220823453 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 21.7502111507 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 0.878197800319 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 58.608811749 50.5018328374 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.90840788429 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265609327346 0.549887131256 48% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109186789573 0.142949733639 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.049551720076 0.0787303798458 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.644532719959 0.631733273073 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157876415911 0.139662658121 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156666861956 0.266732575781 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131851875328 0.103435571967 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310632660586 0.414875509568 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0486667424406 0.0530846634433 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201695708317 0.40443939384 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888145151944 0.0528353158467 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.26048565121 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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