Both the reading passage and the lecture talks about the widespread of malaria and methods to stop the mosquitoes to spread the disease in humans. The former talks about three strategies using which the spread of the diease can be prevented. However, the latter challenges all of these three strategies and mentions none os these can eradicate malaria efficiently and completely.
First of all, the passage mentions that one way to win the battle againt malaria is by treating the patients with powerful medicines. Further, the passage suggests that the patients should check which strain of malaria parasite has infected them so the prescription can be given according to that. However, the professor in the lecture argues that there are no drugs that can cure malaria completely. Moreover, the professor mentions that the current mosquitoes have adapted themselve to the drugs and are now immune so, the two medicines that were used for a long time are no longer effective to treat malaria patients.
Second of all, the passage talks about an other way, that is to kill the parasite-carrying mosquitoes using chemical spray. The passage further mentions that the larvae that is developed in the pools of warm, still water can be killed using chemicals or by releasing a fish into these water that can prey on these guppies and eat them before they mature into adults. However, the professor in the lecture contends this idea because, using chemical is not a good idea the adults can fly and its is unlikely to eliminate them. They will again reproduce and there will be no way to wipe out the mosquito population.
Finally, the passage mentions the last way to stop the spread of this disease is to sterile the insect, which in turn will stop them from reproducing as the eggs the women will lay after mating with a sterile male won't hatch and this will wipe out the population of mosquitoes like the screw-worm and other fruit flies. Nevertheless, like the two suggestion before, the professor in the lecture proclaims that this recommendation is not feasible because, the male insects that are sterile are not as effective in mating compared to the wild insects that aren't sterile. This is becasue after the males become sterile their ability to mate reduces or they start looking unattractive to the women insects this leads to women insects not mating with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
... Second of all, the passage talks about an other way, that is to kill the parasite-carry...
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Line 7, column 555, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ating compared to the wild insects that arent sterile. This is becasue after the male...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1373.03311258 144% => OK
No of words: 400.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.945 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54809242376 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 145.348785872 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 419.366225166 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7566874649 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.285714286 110.228320801 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13326449776 0.272083759551 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514106580014 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325248189056 0.0662205650399 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828581356527 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150254113616 0.0443174109184 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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