Integrated. tpo 26
the reading states that zebra mussel is invasive species and has a serious threat for fish population; indeed, nothing can stop invasion of this species and provides three reasons of support .However, the professor explains that there are ways to control zebra mussel and reject each of the author's reasons.
Firstly, the reading mentions that base on the history of the zebra mussel, there is no practical way to stop its invasion.The professor refutes this point by suggesting that this idea was true, but today there are some ways to control zebra mussel. He gives an example of stopping ships from carrying waters that contain zebra mussel.
Furthermore, the reading claims that zebra mussel has no predators in their new place so they will soon become dominant species. However, the lecturer contends that this idea can't be true since some animals may change their habitat and eat zebra mussel.He mentions that some birds may change their habitat so they could have a lot of food to eat.
Moreover, the reading mentions that zebra mussels are plankton eaters so they will decrease the number of fish which plankton is their food.The professor rejects this point by asserting that even if zebra mussel becomes dominant, they will decrease number of plankton eater fish .However, it has no effect on non-plankton eater fish.To explain his idea, he gives an example of bottom eating fish.
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is invasive species
is an invasive species
nothing can stop invasion of this species
nothing can stop the invasion of this species
base on the history of the zebra mussel,
based on the history of the zebra mussel,
they will decrease the number of fish which plankton is their food.
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Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 12
No. of Words: 235 250
No. of Characters: 1136 1200
No. of Different Words: 119 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.915 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.834 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.164 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.44 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.527 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.814 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.213 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4