ORGANIC FOOD
According to the text, people are starting to purchase organic food, because they are afraid of the use of chemical on fruit and vegetable. The writer points out that chemical used on traditionally grown product are harmful for the environment, impacting the surrounded area and producing pollution, for example water pollution cause by these chemical that make their way to nearby sources of water.
Meanwhile, in the listening, it was said that organic product and traditionally grown product are the same, neither of them would cause something to the ecosystem. She state that the amount of chemical used for the plant are a tiny amount and so, harmless; Also the products are washed before being sell to the super market and also before put on sale for the consumer. Additionally there are strict laws that control the used of this chemicals, so farmer usually are very careful with these. Besides, she says that these product would be harmful to the environment if this are not manage properly, however this go to both of organic and traditionally grown product.
In other words organic and traditional product are both just as good to be consume by us and being harmless to the environment if manage properly by the farmer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...so before put on sale for the consumer. Additionally there are strict laws that control the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...re strict laws that control the used of this chemicals, so farmer usually are very c...
^^^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'these products'?
Suggestion: this product; these products
...eful with these. Besides, she says that these product would be harmful to the environment if ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...mful to the environment if this are not manage properly, however this go to both of or...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 207.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97101449275 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63298763104 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1421307443 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.0 110.228320801 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 21.698381199 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148590891189 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797846896561 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921190207048 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102193465706 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261570919779 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.3589403974 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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