The article discusses about the reduction of the people, especially young people, that read literature. However, the lecturer in the listening section disagrees with the statement and states that people reading any sorts of book are, in fact, decreasing.
To begin with, the reading posits that sharp decline in literature reading audience has caused the missing out of important benefits as nothing can simulate the intellect that literature does. The professor in the listening section disagrees with this statement and says that science, history, etc. which are not literature can be of equally high quality as novels, plays, and poems.
Moreover, the article claims that use of televisions, music videos and web pages which are trivial forms of entertainment has lowered the culture. Nevertheless, the professor refutes this point explaining that culture can be expressed in variety of ways; and continues saying that musics, movies, etc. can be equally informative and intelligent.
Furthermore, the reading mentions that the trend of reading less and less support to literature is regrettable as the writing as well as the reading of literature would probably decline because of the poorer reader of the present days. The professor opposes this argument and says that less support is due to the author's fault as they are unable to produce good quality literatures which can be readily understandable by the general readers. They have written literature that are difficult to understand even by the brilliant reader of the past.
- A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature novels plays and poems than they used to This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public for culture in general and for the futur 76
- TPO 03 Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth century Dutch painters However there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him One such painting is known as attributed to Rem 70
- Private collectors have been selling and buying fossils the petrified remains of ancient organisms ever since the eighteenth century In recent years however the sale of fossils particularly of dinosaurs and other large vertebrates has grown into a big bus 3
- Archeologists have recently found a fossil of a 150 million year old mammal known as Reponomamus Pobustus 3
- The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musicians has been dead for several generations so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment 62
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as the writing as well as the reading of literature would probably decline becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 242.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35123966942 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77027517788 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7325578843 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.727272727 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206003868116 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691606033024 0.0996497079465 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056594306727 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116046921645 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577829484908 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.2367328918 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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