The reading and the lecture are both about the declining in the sea otter which lives in the western coast. More specifically, in regard to the passage, the writer presents three theories about pollution causes and its effect on the drop of these sea animals. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article. His position is that the predator theory it is the cause for this pattern of depletion.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states there are some sources of pollutants in the sea such as oil and chemical materials from factories. The article mentions that this type of pollution can reduce the immunity of these animals which cause its death. This argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims that pollution theory is weaken and cat not cause the death of all these fauna because no remains for otters on the sea. Additionally, He points out that otters consist with predator for support, and if the first theory is true otter cannot wash up on the shore.
Secondly, the author suggests there is a decline in other types of animals in the sea, so whatever the cause of reduce the number for these animals leads to death of otters. In the article it is said that orca can likely to hunt large animals only. Again, the speaker specifically addresses this point when he states this disappear is because human hunters. He goes on to say that orca can consume small animals too.
Finally, the author brings his argument to a close by suggesting that the unusual pattern of these animals can support the theory because there is fluctuation in their numbers in many places. Not surprisingly, the professor takes issue with this claim by contending that this explanation can support orca theory because orca is big, so they cannot eat otters when they locate in shallow water on near rocks. He notes that this variation in their number because of predator theory.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weakened'.
Suggestion: weakened
...rer. He claims that pollution theory is weaken and cat not cause the death of all thes...
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Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fauna' or 'these faunae', 'these faunas'?
Suggestion: this fauna; these faunae; these faunas
...aken and cat not cause the death of all these fauna because no remains for otters on the se...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78899082569 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39131607661 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4705957489 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13977816737 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498705060842 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629303338878 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919709721911 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365281109354 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weakened'.
Suggestion: weakened
...rer. He claims that pollution theory is weaken and cat not cause the death of all thes...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 387, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fauna' or 'these faunae', 'these faunas'?
Suggestion: this fauna; these faunae; these faunas
...aken and cat not cause the death of all these fauna because no remains for otters on the se...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 22.412803532 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78899082569 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39131607661 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4705957489 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.875 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 7.06452816374 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13977816737 0.272083759551 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498705060842 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629303338878 0.0662205650399 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919709721911 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365281109354 0.0443174109184 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.