a specific painting, including portrait of a woman's face, attributed to Rembrandt
Both the reading materials and the listening materials discuss three hypotheses around a portrait of an Elderly Woman in White Bonnet painted by Rembrandt. The reading points out that the painting is not Rembrandt's painting because this painting contains a few different styles from him. In contrast, the listening uses a number of points to refute the reading passage and prove the portrait of the woman is his painting.
The article of the reading, firstly, suggests that Rembrandt's most of the painting takes attention to clothes' small details but this painting's woman only wear a white linen cap. The listening, however, elucidates that the painting of woman was his art when researchers do an x-ray on the painting. some owner of the painting makes some extra details to increase the value of the painting.
Furthermore, the reading passage mentions the painting's light and shadow do not match the Rembrandt's light and shadow. Nevertheless, the professor gives a statement that portrait of woman wears a white linen cap that reflects light, and when seeing the real painting and color reflection of light and shadow, this painting looks really realistic.
The last point of the reading adds that Rembrandt does not use a glued wood panel. The listening rejects this idea saying that wooden panel used in the portrait of the woman and other paintings were from the same tree. because of this masterpiece of art stays a long time, the artists repair its' wooden panel by using glue to makes it more valuable and granted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...esearchers do an x-ray on the painting. some owner of the painting makes some extra ...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ther paintings were from the same tree. because of this masterpiece of art stays a long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04724409449 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53163994644 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1666636592 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.545454545 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161082414183 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745636112198 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435818533696 0.0662205650399 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106021397897 0.162205337803 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375520783914 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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