both the reading and the listening discuss alternative, conventional medicine. The reading states that it alternative more effective than conventional. However, the lecturer contrast with specific points made in the reading passage. The professor says that the alternative not guaranteed.
The first point that the lecturer makes it that the conventional based on health science. According to the professor, alterntaive not based on science, so it's refused, fail to be tested. because it's not based on health science. This point from the lecturer contrasts with the reading because the reading only says that alternative medicine believe that the various alternative methods are more effective than conventional.
Another point that the lecturer uses to cast doubt on the reading is alternative is missled. The lecturer claims that many websites agree with conventional therapy, because many people want it and they want something to believe in. However, the reading only states that The majority of alternative medicine users find the health-care alternatives to be more in agreement with their own values, beliefs, and philosophy about health.
Finally, the professor stated that, on the contrary of the reading, alternative not garunted. In other words, the practioners have any training. So anyone can use it. This contradicts the final idea of reading passage because it only says that To meet the growing demand for alternative treatment, a verity of schools and colleges offer courses in alternative medicine.
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Sentence: The reading states that it alternative more effective than conventional.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
the lecturer contrast with specific points
the lecturer contrasts with the specific points
the alternative not guaranteed.
the alternative is not guaranteed.
the conventional based on health science. According to the professor, alterntaive not based on science
the conventional is based on health science. According to the professor, alterntaive is not based on science
Sentence: This point from the lecturer contrasts with the reading because the reading only says that alternative medicine believe that the various alternative methods are more effective than conventional.
Description: The fragment medicine believe that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace believe with verb, past tense
alternative not garunted.
alternative is not guaranteed.
Sentence: According to the professor, alterntaive not based on science, so it's refused, fail to be tested. because it's not based on health science.
Error: alterntaive Suggestion: alternative
Sentence: Another point that the lecturer uses to cast doubt on the reading is alternative is missled.
Error: missled Suggestion: misled
Sentence: Finally, the professor stated that, on the contrary of the reading, alternative not garunted.
Error: garunted Suggestion: guaranteed
Sentence: In other words, the practioners have any training.
Error: practioners Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 233 250
No. of Characters: 1254 1200
No. of Different Words: 112 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.907 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.382 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.777 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.524 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.399 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.575 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4