First, the article debates about the Chevalier de Senigalt memoir and states that it's not accurate enough and most of his memoir is made up to create this atmosphere in which he had an exciting life and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that no memoir is accurate completely but Chevalier memoir is a reliable source and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First of all, the reading claims that when he was living in Switzerland, he wasn't affluent as he asserts, and he was in debt to a Swiss merchant and it is contrary with the contends which say he was affluent. The professor refutes this point by saying that he spent a huge amount of money on parties and he had to sell properties. She states that by the same token he needs time gap to change assets to money and it doesn't mean he was poor.
Second, the article posits that critics think that his conversations with Voltaire are not accurate because he wrote them many years after their meetings and no one can remember conversations so accurate many years later. However, the professor says that he had this habit which writes all of his conversations in the night. She states he wrote all of his conversations with Voltaire and kept it for many years even people who lived with him confirmed this point about him.
Third, the reading says that the escape of Chevalier from Venice prison was made up to make his memoir interesting and in reality, he used his connections to offer a bribe and escape from prison. The professor opposes this point by explaining in that prison many other persons with more connection couldn't escape with bribery. She explains that they found some documents that show the roof of his cell has been repaired and it proves his escape which he explained in the memoir.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ins that no memoir is accurate completly but Chevalier memoir is a reliable sour...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat no memoir is accurate completly but Chevalier memoir is a reliable source an...
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Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...t when he was living in Switzerland, he wasnt affluent as he asserts, and he was in d...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...me gap to change assets to money and it doesnt mean he was poor. Second, the article ...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...many other persons with more connection couldnt escape with bribery. She explains that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, first of all, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 22.412803532 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67301587302 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43863254661 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520634920635 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3897091789 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.818181818 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 21.698381199 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260195260814 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106896508986 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561475246727 0.0662205650399 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164184853324 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523381135007 0.0443174109184 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.0289183223 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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