The Reading and the lecture are both about employees working four days a week instead of the usual time which his five days a week. The author of the reading believes that employees working for four days has more pros than cons. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He thinks this will create more problems for the company, country , and individually.
First of all, the author points out that the company will be more successful if employees works four days a week. It is mentioned that when employees work for four days are likely to cause devastated errors because they will have more time to rest which will result in the increase of their concentration and it will be better since employees will only get paid 80 percent of their salary. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that companies will have to spend more in training new employees. Thus, will cost them more in providing the requirements like desks and working vacancies. Furthermore, he argues that companies will have to pay the same amount of insurance whether he/she works four days or five days, so the costs will drastically increase.
Secondly, the author contends that the country would also get more benefits if companies started to apply this system. The articles notes that when companies start to apply the four days policy for those who wants it, will create jobs vacancies for the unemployee which the author stated saying that for every 4 employees wanting to change from five days to four days work will provide a job for one employee. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggest that this should not be applied in companies. He elaborates on this point by mentioning that companies will have high expectations from new worker and the mistake they will make will bring misfortune for the company which will only makes the economy getting worse.
- some university students prefer living in campus housing such as dormitories. Other students prefer living in off-campus housing such as apartment. if if you were face with this decision, which of these two options would you choose? use specific reasons t 60
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- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for four days has more pros than cons. The lecturer casts doubt on the claims made...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he claims made in the article. He thinks this will create more problems for the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e thinks this will create more problems for the company, country , and individu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l create more problems for the company, country , and individually. First of a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...more problems for the company, country , and individually. First of all, the a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and it will be better since employees will only get paid 80 percent of their s...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'note'.
Suggestion: note
...rted to apply this system. The articles notes that when companies start to apply the ...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge from five days to four days work will provide a job for one employee. The lect...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
.... The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggest that this should not be applied in com...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... suggest that this should not be applied in companies. He elaborates on this poin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 5.04856512141 357% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 320.0 270.72406181 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83125 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40056977026 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.1348122727 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.066666667 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446715887364 0.272083759551 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145185247682 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114919654614 0.0662205650399 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319606257777 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392848002348 0.0443174109184 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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