The reading passage says that a four days workweek will benifit both the company and individual employees. On the other hand, the lecture shows that how four days workweek will affect the company as well as the employees.
First, the passage shows that as the workers will work for fours days a week, more workers can be hired in less payment and it will benefit the company economically. However, the lecturer opposes the point by explaining that hiring more employees will force the company to spend money on more training, new computers, new office space and so on. It will increase the cost of company and soon cutout in the company revenue.
Second, the passage says that four days workweek will open an opportunity for new full-time employees which will reduce the unemployment problems. The lecturer refutes the point by saying that the companies might think five days work can be done in four days and they can ask employees to do overtime which will be a pressure upon the employees. Therefore it will not create any new job opportunities.
Finally, the passage claims that because of four days workweek employees will feel more relaxed and can spend more time with their families. Whereas the lecturer shows that how four days workweek can decrease the job stability and harm the employees in their advancement of their career. He explains that during the economical downtown, four days employees are more likely to be fired. In addition, four days employees are less likely to be promoted as companies prefer to promote the five days workers.
Though the reading passage show the benefits of four days workweek, the lecturer points out the disadvantages of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 5.04856512141 337% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50245088856 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460992907801 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8238321245 49.2860985944 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392250709577 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171670235013 0.0996497079465 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692193774456 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234998362565 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908314759881 0.0443174109184 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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