both reading and listening discuss working plan which allow to work 4 days in a week. The article states benefit of four day work plan and provides several reasons such as increasing company plan, positive effect on economy and improving quality of people life. However the speaker states that four days plan will have not positive effect and even it can be dangerous and refutes each author's reasons.
First of all the article claims that Company profits are increased by shortened workweek since Individual,works four days in a week, will make less cost error. thus Companies can hire more staff. Furthermore, Unemployment rate is reduced by shortened work week. However the speaker disagree this point and says that company will force to spend more money means much more money. adding new workers is costly and it means new work place and office, extra healtf care. They will cut companies profits.
Lastly, the article posits that the quality of people's life may be better with four days work plan. According to the article people might have spare time and spend more time with their families or looking for private interest or activities.. However, the speaker disagree and says that it include some risk. Shortened workweek can reducing quality of life such as harm chance advancing in carrier. Company might choose the people ,works 5 days in a week, for manager position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
both reading and listening discuss working p...
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Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'working'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: working
...tening discuss working plan which allow to work 4 days in a week. The article states be...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'plan' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'plans'.
Suggestion: plans
...article states benefit of four day work plan and provides several reasons such as in...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any plan, positive effect on economy and improving quality of people life. Howeve...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and improving quality of people life. However the speaker states that four days plan ...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , works
...d by shortened workweek since Individual,works four days in a week, will make less cos...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...s in a week, will make less cost error. thus Companies can hire more staff. Furtherm...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...s in a week, will make less cost error. thus Companies can hire more staff. Furtherm...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...rate is reduced by shortened work week. However the speaker disagree this point and say...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
... point and says that company will force to spend more money means much more money. addin...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Adding
...spend more money means much more money. adding new workers is costly and it means new ...
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Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...oking for private interest or activities.. However, the speaker disagree and says ...
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Line 6, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eek can reducing quality of life such as harm chance advancing in carrier. Compan...
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Line 6, column 431, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...carrier. Company might choose the people ,works 5 days in a week, for manager posi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, may, so, thus, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0347826087 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34797101002 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1556881194 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 110.228320801 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293516447938 0.272083759551 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109466435155 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530749298821 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206336785934 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233154035802 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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