Both reading and listening discussing pros and cons of the four-day week. The author of the reading states how decreasing the number of business days can be beneficial. However, the lecturer challenges the points that are made in article and believes that it is not a good proposal.
According to the passage, the shortened workweek can increase the number of mistakes that employees make. In order to solve the problem, companies should hire four-day employees, who prevent such mistakes due to the point that they are rested and ale. The lecturer casts doubt on this point and he says that Hiring more staff costs a lot because the company has to spend money for training new employees, provide medical services for them and buying new tools for them to work.
Second, based on the reading, making workweek short would reduce unemployment rates since that If many full-time staff started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others and as a result, new employee should be hired. Nevertheless, the professor rebuts this claim and illustrate that hiring new worker is costly. It is not a rational idea to catch more staff. The current workers could make up the remain works if they overwork throughout the business days.
Third, the reading states how four-day workweek would be helpful for individual employees. Whereas, the listening demonstrates that this option may decrease the quality of their lives because it can result in higher possibility of loosing job. Moreover, it takes the opportunity to advance in their career. Additionally, companies tend to have some people who work five days a week as managers to make sure that they are able to manage both their tasks and those of their teams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rates since that If many full-time staff started working fewer hours, some of the...
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Line 5, column 431, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...taff. The current workers could make up the remain works if they overwork throughout the b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, third, whereas, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03092783505 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50800727567 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.912319369 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452117292623 0.272083759551 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11941298655 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995429615544 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238034253389 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874371558203 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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