TPO-07 - Integrated Writing Task In an effort to encourage ecologically sustainable forestry practices, an international organization started issuing certifications to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recyclin

Both reading and listening discuss the a certification,includes high standards by conserving resources and recyling material, for american wood companies. The reading says that American companies will not willing to get it and provides several reasons. However, the proffesor opposes it and refutes each author's reaons.

First of all, the first argument used by the authour is that consumers in america don not pay attention the advertising because they are many add on the Tv. Morever, They do not trust claims in general. However, the speaker says that Consumers distinguish the prodcts and they will trust this certificate which is favour of consumers.

Secondly, The reading claims that uncertificated wood will be cheaper than certificated one due to expenses of having it. Extra cost which paid by companies will transfered product price from companies to consumers which sensitive to the price. But the speaker says that consumers are sensitive to the price when the prices is close eachothers.

Thirdly,the reading posits that american firms,which sells their goods mainlyin the usa markets, do not compete with th compaines in aboard. The idea selling more by getting certifications and keeping up new technologies is all wrong. The speaker reject this idea and say that there are a strong competition between the Usa and forgein firms.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
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Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , includes
...nd listening discuss the a certification,includes high standards by conserving resources ...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst argument used by the authour is that consumers in america don not pay attenti...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... prices is close eachothers. Thirdly,the reading posits that american firms,whic...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...y,the reading posits that american firms,which sells their goods mainlyin the usa mark...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their goods mainlyin the usa markets, do not compete with th compaines in aboard....
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te with th compaines in aboard. The idea selling more by getting certifications a...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'rejects'.
Suggestion: rejects
... technologies is all wrong. The speaker reject this idea and say that there are a stro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in general, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 213.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36150234742 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98758331783 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8014438762 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06452816374 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370839644788 0.272083759551 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120748224736 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660491562586 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198005600286 0.162205337803 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528924778371 0.0443174109184 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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