First of all, the author points out that some critics say that many of the things he said was not accurate. It is mentioned that he actually created many events to prove to people that his life was good. This point is mentioned by the lecturer. He says that the stories, he put in his story was indeed true. Furthermore, he argues that his life was indeed very eventful.
Secondly the author contends that the critics are skeptical of the conversations with the author Voltaire. The lecturer contends this argument. The article notes, that the conversations happened many years before the memoir. The lecturer rebuts this argument. The Lecturer notes that it is true. He says the whole conversation was heard by a witness, making sure about everything they said. Chevalier also had a habit of recording every conversation he has ever had.
Finally, the author notes that it is crazy, about his story of escaping from prison. The article notes that, he wrote that he used a piece of metal to dig a hole out through the roof. Critics think he may have bribed some people to help him. He had a lot of known people who could have helped him. The lecturer on the other hand points out that there was construction. It is said that on government paper had a report of an ongoing construction, which would have helped him escape.
- Rembrant 3
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- TPO 49 Integrated Writing Task Like many creatures humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling In the case of humpback whales we may have found the answer the 70
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- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... happened many years before the memoir. The lecturer rebuts this argument. The Lect...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oir. The lecturer rebuts this argument. The Lecturer notes that it is true. He says...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 7.30242825607 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68376068376 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48916125118 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521367521368 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5342906696 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8888888889 110.228320801 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0 21.698381199 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367005391988 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105649986638 0.0996497079465 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647538575474 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233447988433 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00356508528095 0.0443174109184 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.3589403974 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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