The reading states that many empoyees are going to change five days working with four-day week and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor claims that four days working is not a good idea and oposess each of the reasons.
First, the passage claims that some companies have a obligatory policy to cut their expenses. However, the professor refutes this point by saying that more employees must be chosen and that never allows to have any decression in the amount of payed money. he also mentioned that other expenses like health care and medical treatment are thesame for all employees that work in 4 or 5 days but more employees means to have more expenses in that way.
Second, the reading avers that lower working hours will help to company to gain more profit due to more rested and alert. The professor explains that maybe job opportunetiy increases, but hiring new employees will have its own expenses. he also mentioned that more employees must do the work of 5-day working employees and this wont make any profit to the company.
Third, the reading states that by cutin one day of week, the employees will have more time to assign to their family an do their private interests. However the professor contends this point by saying that more free time will not be effective for employees. he explains that employees will lose their ability because they take distance from their job and their efficency wont be as the time that they have shorter vacation.
- TPO 10 -1 3
- Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 37 3
- TPO 30 – Integrated 86
- TPO 05_ Integrated Writing 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...passage claims that some companies have a obligatory policy to cut their expenses...
^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ecression in the amount of payed money. he also mentioned that other expenses like...
^^
Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...oyees that work in 4 or 5 days but more employees means to have more expenses in that way...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...w employees will have its own expenses. he also mentioned that more employees must...
^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ave more time to assign to their family an do their private interests. However the...
^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ave more time to assign to their family an do their private interests. However the pr...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...r family an do their private interests. However the professor contends this point by sa...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...me will not be effective for employees. he explains that employees will lose their...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 254.0 270.72406181 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83858267717 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28444521435 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531496062992 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.563977777 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.727272727 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787227452305 0.272083759551 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347506659116 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210442755846 0.0662205650399 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497591532179 0.162205337803 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314194272219 0.0443174109184 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.8541721854 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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