The lecture and reading passage discussing about saving Torreya taxifoga trees from the extinct. According to the reading passage three possible solutions helps to protect Torreya trees. However, the lecturer contradicts the each solution provides in the reading passage. He states that article presents three solutions getting unsatisfactory results.
To begin with, the lecturer opposes the first solution made in the reading passage that the reestablish Torreya in the same place in Florida. He mentions that plantation of Torreya in a microclimate in Florida is impossible because of coolest and dampest area near to the warmer region. Global warming strongly effects on the microclimate area, so, increase temperature and unable to survive in Torreya plant in the dried region.
Furthermore, the lecturer explains that plantation of Torreya in different place getting the unpredictable result. For an example, Black Locus trees plantation in the north area in which Locus species grow quickly and spread the whole region. In fact, it was killed huge another plant of that area. So, moving plant on another region is a danger for native plants in that areas and getting unpredictable results, all these reasons, the lecture contradicts specific suggestion made in the reading passage that relocating plant by helping of the human get the survive in new place.
Moreover, the article emphasizes that storage of Torreya in the research center. These notions help to easily conduct the study and close monitoring to plants. The lecturer, in contrast, points out that Torreya kept in a research center is not a good idea because of it cannot resistant to the diseases. Torreya needs large and great diversity for increase population but research center in not right space to catch the great diversity and protect from the diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lution made in the reading passage that the reestablish Torreya in the same place in Florida. H...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ating plant by helping of the human get the survive in new place. Moreover, the article em...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in contrast, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33448275862 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67406845326 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.642779393 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32705228578 0.272083759551 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114602454787 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638026396048 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201148605432 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678394505888 0.0443174109184 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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