The reading suggests three ways to save the endangered plant called Torreya Taxihofa, which is an evergreen tree that prevalent in the Florida. However, the professor claims that none of the solutions will give a satisfactory result. She adds that the advice written in the article does not solve the problem and unlikely to be successful. Therefore, she contradicts each of author’s reasons.
First, the reading avers that the Torreya taxihova should be planted in the northern part of Florida where it is the indigenous plant and has a suitable microclimate ( a situation where the weather condition different from the surrounding region) that supports the tree to thrive. The lecturer refutes the suggestion by explaining that the solution not feasible because of the effect of global warming. The global warming increases the temperature in the area from cool and damp to warm and dry. This condition will hinder the Torreya taxihova to flourish.
Second, the article posits that the plant should migrated, assist by the human, to the forest in the further north where the climate is colder. Due to the preceded experiment where the Torreya seeds and saplings have been successfully planted and grown, the article believes that bring back the flora to their original home will save the plant from an extinction. However, the lecturer contends that the plan probably will backfire since the plant may overgrowth and destruct the local ecosystem. She underscores the unpredictable outcome of this intervention. Furthermore, she explains the point with the black locus tree incident. The black tree is moved to the different area with a more suitable environment to develop however, the tree spread so quickly and killed the other tree.
Third, the author advices the Torreya taxihova preserves at the research centre since it is easier to protect and conduct research. The lecturer opposes this suggestion by stated that to resist the disease, the tree need to be relocated at the place with extensive and diverse ecosystem, research centre simply doesn’t have the capacity to provide it.
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- TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task In the 1950s Torreya taxifoha, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida, started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya wi 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us plant and has a suitable microclimate a situation where the weather condition ...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inder the Torreya taxihova to flourish. Second, the article posits that the plan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25816023739 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70464319055 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53115727003 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0070560501 49.2860985944 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 110.228320801 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357364636816 0.272083759551 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985597908764 0.0996497079465 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921313763678 0.0662205650399 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206059028344 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596457712778 0.0443174109184 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.3589403974 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 63.6247240618 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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