The article states that let it burn policy assume that forests will burn themselves quickly and provides three reason to support.However the professor explains that fire is natural ecological disaster and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading passage claims that Yellowstone fire tremendous damage to forest and all the forest dried out after that. The professor refutes this point by saying that Yellowstone was unfortunate that happened on 1988. She stated that it caused diverse growing of plants afterwards and it caused shaded place and growing of small plants..
Second, the article posits that it destroyed lots of animals. However, the professor says that replace trees that caused rabits and herds raising in this enviroment. So many predators are dependent to them for food now.
Third, the reading says that tourist attraction is compromised. The professor opposes this point by explaining that tourist attraction reasons are also low rain fall and low accumulation.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: However, the professor says that replace trees that caused rabits and herds raising in this enviroment.
Error: enviroment Suggestion: environment
Error: rabits Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 157 250 //Need more content.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 157 250
No. of Characters: 824 1200
No. of Different Words: 97 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.54 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.248 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.355 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ly and provides three reason to support.However the professor explains that fire is nat...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly and provides three reason to support.However the professor explains that fire is nat...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owing of plants afterwards and it caused shaded place and growing of small plants...
^^
Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...shaded place and growing of small plants.. Second, the article posits that it d...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267857142857 0.261695866417 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.196428571429 0.158904122519 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.077380952381 0.0723426182421 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0297619047619 0.0435111971325 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0416666666667 0.0277247811725 150% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119047619048 0.128828473217 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0370669169778 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65353646155 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0178571428571 0.0208969081088 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00595238095238 0.00154638098197 385% => OK
Determiners: 0.0952380952381 0.128158765124 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00595238095238 0.0158828679856 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119047619048 0.0114777025283 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1003.0 1645.83664459 61% => OK
No of words: 156.0 271.125827815 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42948717949 6.08160592843 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 4.04852973271 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.442307692308 0.374372842146 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.320512820513 0.287516216867 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185897435897 0.187439937562 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134615384615 0.113142543107 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65353646155 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 145.348785872 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.539623497131 118% => OK
Word variations: 58.5674209618 53.8517498576 109% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 21.7502111507 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4053721844 49.3711431718 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 132.220823453 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 21.7502111507 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.878197800319 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 51.5512820513 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.57777777778 1.90840788429 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510236588773 0.549887131256 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0991995308852 0.142949733639 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748775017299 0.0787303798458 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623573594325 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178368393475 0.139662658121 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240986583193 0.266732575781 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106640786648 0.103435571967 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.30580591541 0.414875509568 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554267822686 0.0530846634433 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347421090394 0.40443939384 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754599169966 0.0528353158467 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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