TPO 23 Integrated Writing Task

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TPO-23 - Integrated Writing Task

Submitted by 62668692 on Wed, 11/01/2017 - 13:53

The reading passage states that, the population of cedar trees in northwestern North America, declined more than a century now, and provides 3 reasons for support that. The professor, on the other hand, does not agree with brought up by the passage and offer some counterclaims to refute them.
First of all, the author says that, decrease of population yellow cedar is due to insect parasites, such as bark beetle that attack to cedar trees and larvae eat wood. Conversely, the speaker believes that these type of trees are resistant and leaves of them are toxic, so they have power chemical materials that damages insects and may kill them.
Secondly, the article asserts that cedar trees are a main diet od brown beer that eat tree bark and claw the cedar, bark has high sugar and suitable for brown bear. However, the lecture states that, brown bear damages to cut trees but not kill them and decline cedar. He also illustrates that in island where cedar decrease, there are not brown bears and is irresponsible of death of cedar.
As a result, the massage climes that changes of climate effects on root systems and modify temperatures, and roots are sensitive and freezing on cold winter. On the contrary, the lecture rejects the author’s idea that in low temperature roots become freezing and he explains that in low elevations where it is warm and in high elevation is cold, declining of cedar occur more than high elevations that temperature is cold and freezing. He says that climate changes maybe damages roots and they become more sensitive, but this is not cause of declining.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The reading passage states that, the pop...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve, but this is not cause of declining.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 7.30242825607 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88602941176 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48733546082 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3600041356 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06452816374 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434492000176 0.272083759551 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160924203893 0.0996497079465 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753248869084 0.0662205650399 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230967445598 0.162205337803 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624710443935 0.0443174109184 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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