The reading states that zebra mussel has been spreading out and it is not possible that this invasion can be stopped and it poses a serious threat to fresh water and provides three reasons of support. The professor, however, refutes this point by saying that there are some ways to control spreading of zebra mussel.
First, the reading claims that the history of the zebra mussl's spread shows that the invasion might be unstoppable. The professor, expalins that although it is true that it was not stoppable in the past, it is possible now. As an example, he mensions that the spreading of zebras mussle by ship can be prevented by empetying the ships and refilling them in ocean water in Europe.
Furthormore, the article states that when the zebra mussls carry to new habitat, they dominate that area. The lecturer, on the other hand, refutes this point by stating that there are some other food resources that they can eat.
Finally, the reading states that zebra mussels are to cause a decline in the overall fish population in habitats where they become dominant. Again, the professor refutes this point by saying that it is true that zebra mussels result in declining fish population in the area where they dominated but they result in increasing on other kind of fish in othere areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, so, kind of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1073.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81165919283 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35205106698 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 145.348785872 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511210762332 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9833298597 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.222222222 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408744988119 0.272083759551 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179841419958 0.0996497079465 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870095877184 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245973121588 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684545811617 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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