TPO 27 integrated writing : Little Ice Age
The reading and the lecture are both about What were the cause of little ice age! The passage brings some facts that could be effect on this matter, however, professor wants to deny the information.
To begin with, the author argues that large amount of melting ice that the high temperature climate caused, flowed to the oceans then water got cool then it effect on hole weather in the earth, however, lecturer explain that all of this information are out off date and non of them could account.Although in that era temperature went up and large amount of ice melted, it just could effect on some small area not cause the ice age.
Secondly, the writer suggests volcano took dust into the air, and they blocked sunlight. The result of this were ice age. Professor claims that if it happened some visual effects showed like: changing the sunset color, changing white snow to gray snow. But nothing mentioned in the history.
finally reading says last thing about little ice age. In result of reduced population in the earth, less carbon dioxide have produced, so, trees was the cause of ice age. The lecturer claims that there were not enough time to made this possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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The reading and the lecture are both abo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...fessor wants to deny the information. To begin with, the author argues that la...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effects'?
Suggestion: effects
... the oceans then water got cool then it effect on hole weather in the earth, however, ...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
... off date and non of them could account.Although in that era temperature went up and lar...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...rge amount of ice melted, it just could effect on some small area not cause the ice ag...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome small area not cause the ice age. Secondly, the writer suggests volcano to...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ey blocked sunlight. The result of this were ice age. Professor claims that if it ha...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...But nothing mentioned in the history. finally reading says last thing about li...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...othing mentioned in the history. finally reading says last thing about little ic...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: finally,
...othing mentioned in the history. finally reading says last thing about little ic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 204.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76960784314 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25421984568 2.5805825403 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 117.610258224 49.2860985944 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 21.698381199 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361698555007 0.272083759551 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142696203234 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101690931116 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217477697213 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786198422878 0.0443174109184 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 63.6247240618 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.7273730684 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.