TPO 31 – Integrated

Both the lecture and reading discussed about that Sinosauropteryx which was a kind of dinosaur had feathers based on fine lines discovering surrounding the skeletal bones.
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fine lines may presented other part of dinosaurs' anatomy
fine lines may present other part of dinosaurs' anatomy

Feathers contain many a kind of proteins is called Carraton,
Feathers contain many kinds of proteins which are called Carraton,
Feathers contain many kinds of proteins called Carraton,

according the fine lines;
according to the fine lines;

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2

You have issues on sentence structures.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 308 250
No. of Characters: 1544 1200
No. of Different Words: 159 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.013 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.533 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.265 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.933 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4