Tpo 33
The reading passage proposes some theories associated with the probable purpose and meaning of some carved, round shaped, and decorated stones that are found in scotland. The lecture, however, casts doubt on proposed ideas and offer some counterclaims to refute them all.
First, the reading argues that stones might have been used as wepones in fighting or hunting since there are hole in some of them and also grooves on their surfaces. In contrast, the professor is of the idea that they could not have been weapon for there is no sign of damage on them. Indeed, having been well preserved indicates that they did not used to be used in fighting or hunting.
Next, the passage mentions that all of the stones are of the same size and standard in shape; therefore, they could have been units of weight in their mesurement system. Conversely, the speaker brings up the fact that dispite being of the same size and shape, the stones are different in weight due to their mass which is related to the diverse kinds of stones of which they had been made. She also mentions it is crystal clear that save volum of different density results in different mass which illustrate why they had not been weight units.
Finally, the pasage states that the stones may have served as social marks owing to their elaborate disigns. On the contrary, the lecturer dismisses the issue due to a couple of facts. On the on hand, some of designs are too simple to be considered as social signs. On the other hand, they social signs would be buried down with the owner; however, no one of these stones were found in a tumb or near a human body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'holes'?
Suggestion: holes
... in fighting or hunting since there are hole in some of them and also grooves on the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...l preserved indicates that they did not used to be used in fighting or hunting. Ne...
^^^^
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ting. Next, the passage mentions that all of the stones are of the same size and standar...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: standard
... of the stones are of the same size and standard in shape; therefore, they could have been units ...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: different
...the same size and shape, the stones are different in weight due to their mass which is related to t...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the designs') or simply say ''some designs''.
Suggestion: some of the designs; some designs
...e to a couple of facts. On the on hand, some of designs are too simple to be considered as soci...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...imple to be considered as social signs. On the other hand, they social signs would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64359861592 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23005481516 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522491349481 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6062061343 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358142441681 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127545434217 0.0996497079465 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732277632824 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200574588214 0.162205337803 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422534123169 0.0443174109184 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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