TPO 36 Integrated WritingHail—pieces of ice that form and fall from clouds instead of snow or rain—has always been a problem for farmers in some areas of the United States. Hail pellets can fall with great force and destroy crops in the field. Over th

Based on the given materials, the article as well as the lecture discusses cloud seeding. It's defined as a method in which the chemical silver iodide is dispersed on clouds, and it prevents the clouds from producing hail, which is harmful components to crops of some US farms. The author states that there are several theories regarding how much efficient cloud seeding method is. That being said, the lecturer provides several ideas to repudiate this claim.
Initially, the author says that under laboratory conditions, it has been examined that by adding silver iodide to cold water vapor, which is plentiful in clouds, light snow forms will be emerged. However, the lecturer explains that this phenomenon is just true during laboratory experiments; but in a real condition, adding silver iodide to the clouds prevents any formations from appearing, even snow and rain. Thus, if this method runs in low-rain regions, it would cause droughts, which is more harmful to crops, in compared to the pressures of hail.
Second, the writer proclaims that there have been seen several successful cloud seeding processes in urban areas of Asian countries, which show the efficiency of this method. Yet again, the speaker underscores that the mentioned evidences were in urban areas, which did have polluted environment; there are lots of air pollutions made by car traffics or another way, that provide a favorable condition for cloud seeding. Interactions between polluted clouds and seeding chemicals, as an advantage for urban areas, will not occur in farming regions. So, never is the cloud seeding process sufficient for farming regions.
The final point of contention between the reading passage and the listening one is local studies. The author thinks that based on a study done in the central US, the number of damaged crops has been decreased by cloud seeding, in compared to the previous years. On the other hand, the speaker explains that the same result has been reported in other neighboring regions, such as north, south and east. Thus, this phenomenon has not been affected by cloud seeding.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is never
... will not occur in farming regions. So, never is the cloud seeding process sufficient fo...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1373.03311258 128% => OK
No of words: 342.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15497076023 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52767081107 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5003975521 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.533333333 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131140706836 0.272083759551 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045160951032 0.0996497079465 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265445859901 0.0662205650399 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797473777469 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00843831108258 0.0443174109184 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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