tpo 40
The material discusses the concept of the availability of living on Venus surface. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points in regard to this topic, namely the atmospheric pressure of Venus surface is 90 times higher than the Earth. In addition to that, there is no source for water or oxygen on the surface of this plant. Finally, the sunlight that could reach to Venus surface is too little.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is usually the surface atmospheric pressure is higher than the atmosphere one, the surface atmospheric pressure in Venus is higher than Earth but if we go up 50 kilometer it will equal the earth’s pressure. Next, may be there is no water or oxygen in Venus but there is another chemical such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid, so these chemicals can be used to produce water and oxygen. One final point, there is lots of clouds in Venus, however they are not very thick. 40% of them sunlight can get through the clouds, while the rest will be reflected. Scientists could collect both direct sunlight and the reflected one to produce more than enough solar power to get electricity.
In summary, there are obvious discrepancies with the information presented as each piece illustrates varying perspectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ooks at the topic from one perspective, the the listening challenges certain points out...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ooks at the topic from one perspective, the the listening challenges certain points out...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oints outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific po...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reach to Venus surface is too little. Conversely, the listening challenges the...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...is higher than Earth but if we go up 50 kilometer it will equal the earth's pressure...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...duce water and oxygen. One final point, there is lots of clouds in Venus, however they are no...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enough solar power to get electricity. In summary, there are obvious discrepanc...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...piece illustrates varying perspectives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, while, in addition, in summary, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74610476625 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2586710608 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.727272727 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315134538688 0.272083759551 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11369758713 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05976254595 0.0662205650399 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150307035574 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109195475192 0.0443174109184 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.