TPO 41 - integrated writing
According to the reading, environmentalists says that coal ash has dangerous materials that are harmful for the environment, therefore the government should create stricter laws to prevent the damage made on nature. However, the power companies don't agree with this idea for few reasons. The speaker thinks that the new laws should be conducted, and refutes all of the reasons presented by representatives of power companies.
First, the passage indicates that power companies representatives says already, there are a lot of regulation like companies have to use liner in every new landfill to prevent ash coal from leaking to soil and water. In contrary to this, the lecturer indicates that previous rules are not enough for this matter. For example, liner is used just in new landfills and this law doesn't include old pond or landfill. She thinks that new regulation should force companies to use liner in every field, both the new and the old ones.
Second, the writing notes that new regulations discourge buyers from buying recycled coal ash products because they begin to be very concerned about the recycled product. In contrast to this point, the professor points that people will continue buying the product, and companies should not worry about this matter. For example, mercury is a highly dangerous material and restriction forced companies to recycle it better. From that time, people are buying products made from mercury and they are not concerned about its danger.
Finally, the article writes that new regulations increase the overall cost of the process for companies; as the result, companies will be obliged to increase the price of electricity which will make negative impression on public. However, the speaker says that it's true that the price increases but it worth it because if you calculate the money, companies will pay 15 million dollars and if they add this money to the electricity price. the overall increasment will be 1% for each consumer which is very less for keeping the environment safe.
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Essay evaluation report
environmentalists says that
environmentalist says that
power companies representatives says already,
power companies representatives say already,
but it worth it
Definitions of worth
adjective
equivalent in value to the sum or item specified.
jewelry worth $450 was taken
noun
the value equivalent to that of someone or something under consideration; the level at which someone or something deserves to be valued or rated.
they had to listen to every piece of gossip and judge its worth
Sentence: Second, the writing notes that new regulations discourge buyers from buying recycled coal ash products because they begin to be very concerned about the recycled product.
Error: discourge Suggestion: discourage
Sentence: However, the speaker says that it's true that the price increases but it worth it because if you calculate the money, companies will pay 15 million dollars and if they add this money to the electricity price. the overall increasment will be 1 for each consumer which is very less for keeping the environment safe.
Error: increasment Suggestion: increment
flaws:
No. of Words: 333 250
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 333 250
No. of Characters: 1660 1200
No. of Different Words: 169 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.272 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.985 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.613 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.119 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.6 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
According to the reading, environmentali...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...on nature. However, the power companies dont agree with this idea for few reasons. T...
^^^^
Line 1, column 362, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...w laws should be conducted, and refutes all of the reasons presented by representatives of...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... representatives of power companies. First, the passage indicates that power ...
^^^
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...used just in new landfills and this law doesnt include old pond or landfill. She think...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ield, both the new and the old ones. Second, the writing notes that new regul...
^^^^
Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...triction forced companies to recycle it better. From that time, people are buying prod...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are not concerned about its danger. Finally, the article writes that new reg...
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Line 7, column 442, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...dd this money to the electricity price. the overall increasment will be 1% for each...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15105740181 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6665871816 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519637462236 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7103392338 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.785714286 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460155989779 0.272083759551 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157580334762 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925351569945 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273835926731 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618817463452 0.0443174109184 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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