In the lecture, the professor makes a series of points that cast doubt on all the arguments presented in the passage .The professor believes new stricter rules are definitely necessary and refutes all the reasons that author presents in the article .The author states in the reading that sufficient rules for coal waste are already exist and there is no need to have more stricter rules.
First of all, the professor argues with the fact that liner rule is sufficient .She states that this rules are applied for only new land and pond not old one, so for older land these rules are not applicable.There are significant damage in the old land which made leak ground and contamination of drinking water which is very harmful for people.
Second, the professor points out to the fact that example of mercury in the past and for 50 years shows us that consumers do not nessessarily stop buying recycling materials due to stricter rules.
Lastly, the lecturer believes the increase cost of power company is true .However she states it is acceptable by people as it would be only 10 percent increase for every household. If people have cleaner energy this cost is reasonable.
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- Humans have long been fascinated by elephants, the largest land animal in the modern world. Social animals that live in herds, elephants are native to both Africa and Asia. Their large ears, long trunk, and long life span have made elephants one of the mo 78
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the arguments presented in the passage .The professor believes new stricter rules a...
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...sons that author presents in the article .The author states in the reading that su...
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Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stricter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stricter
...eady exist and there is no need to have more stricter rules. First of all, the professor arg...
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...h the fact that liner rule is sufficient .She states that this rules are applied f...
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Suggestion: She
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Suggestion: There
...der land these rules are not applicable.There are significant damage in the old land ...
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...e increase cost of power company is true .However she states it is acceptable by p...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...increase cost of power company is true .However she states it is acceptable by people a...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...0 percent increase for every household. If people have cleaner energy this cost is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 201.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84577114428 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53868853578 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 419.366225166 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 21.2450331126 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.39700993 49.2860985944 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.8 110.228320801 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2 21.698381199 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229381118628 0.272083759551 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106972870071 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457169719947 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123842381158 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148347390984 0.0443174109184 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.3589403974 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 53.8541721854 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.7273730684 247% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.498013245 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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