TPO 42 - Integrated Writing Task
In the passage, three solutions that responsible businesses can us to prevent injuries to birds are presented. In contrast, the professor holds opposing points of view.
First of all, it is thought to truth that one-way glass can effectively prevents birds from injuries. Notwithstanding, the professor puts forth that one-way glass indeed reflects like mirror. Birds cannot understand the reflection of mirror. As a result, when they see one-way window, they may be confusing whether there are ways to go or not.
Secondly, colorful designs are considered to be one of the solutions because birds will know the barrier when they see colorful designs. Nevertheless, the professor holds a contradictory view that colorful designs are more likely to be thought to be open-holes. In this case, birds will just try to fly right through them. Plus, colorful designs require large parts of the space on windows which will definitely make the inside place dark.
Thirdly, it is convinced that artificial magnetic field will help birds since birds use magnetic field to migrate. Whereas, the professor indicates that birds only use the magnetic fields to migrate when they are travelling in long distance. When they are travelling in short distance like city to city, they use their eyes. Consequently, artificial magnetic fields will not help them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'prevent'
Suggestion: prevent
...ruth that one-way glass can effectively prevents birds from injuries. Notwithstanding, t...
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Line 8, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ce birds use magnetic field to migrate. Whereas, the professor indicates that birds onl...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, in contrast, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 215.0 270.72406181 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73634670568 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572093023256 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 419.366225166 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7684485468 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4285714286 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3571428571 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06452816374 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475556175381 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152102493997 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760186711703 0.0662205650399 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246057443441 0.162205337803 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777503216555 0.0443174109184 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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