tpo 45
The reading and the lecture discuss a theory about the builder of a nest that has been found inside a fossilized tree in Arizona. The passage claims that several reasons demonstrate that bees were not the habitats of the nest. In other words, bees did not build the nest. However, the speaker brings up three reasons to rebut all dubious ideas presented in the passage and states that several pieces of evidence show that the nest was made by bees.
First of all, the writer holds the view that no bee’s fossil has been found from 200 million years ago. Accordingly, this nest which has been built 200 million years ago did not belong to bees. In contrast, the lecturer refutes this idea and underlines the fact that the absent of fossilized bees doesn't imply the absent of bee. As a matter of fact, a specific tree makes a special resin that is used for fossilizing. This type of tree was not common at that time. The main reason for the absence of fossilized bee is that there was not this type of tree to produce this specific resin.
Second of all, the passage contends that absence of flowering plants shows that there was not any bee 200 million years ago, since flowering plants are the main source of food for bees. However, the speaker contradicts this contention and asserts that flowering plants are the crucial source of nutrition for modern bees which does not demonstrate that ancient bee also used flowing plants. Indeed, some theories show that bees used to feed on fern and pine trees which are none flowering. Feeding on flowering plants is kind of adaptation of bees. In other words, the absence of flowering plants doesn't concludes the absence of bees.
Finally, the writer states that there is some different between the nest structure and modern bees’ nest design. On the contrary, the professor rebuts this statement and stresses that the unsimilarity in some details is not a convincing evidence. As a matter of fact, some chemical evidence supports the presence of bees on the nest. Bees produce some waterproofing material that has been found on the nest. Bees are the only producer of that specific material which shows that the nest was built by bees.
- tpo 45 63
- TPO 25 , Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. 60
- tpo 46 70
- Tpo 40- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 60
- TPO 41 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...fact that the absent of fossilized bees doesnt imply the absent of bee. As a matter of...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... words, the absence of flowering plants doesnt concludes the absence of bees. Finally...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'in contrast', 'kind of', 'as a matter of fact', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261282660333 0.261695866417 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.171021377672 0.158904122519 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0712589073634 0.0723426182421 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0451306413302 0.0435111971325 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0277247811725 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.144893111639 0.128828473217 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0498812351544 0.0370669169778 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34534223386 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00950118764846 0.0208969081088 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00237529691211 0.00154638098197 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.142517814727 0.128158765124 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0158828679856 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166270783848 0.0114777025283 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2192.0 1645.83664459 133% => OK
No of words: 380.0 271.125827815 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76842105263 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.04852973271 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315789473684 0.374372842146 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228947368421 0.287516216867 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.136842105263 0.187439937562 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0842105263158 0.113142543107 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34534223386 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426315789474 0.539623497131 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2908520532 53.8517498576 82% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0529801325 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.7502111507 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1431785702 49.3711431718 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.6 132.220823453 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 21.7502111507 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.878197800319 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 41.8947368421 50.5018328374 83% => OK
Elegance: 2.10989010989 1.90840788429 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493153409354 0.549887131256 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.200259351162 0.142949733639 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0966123214301 0.0787303798458 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601966281729 0.631733273073 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135992089875 0.139662658121 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23729942655 0.266732575781 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877834037515 0.103435571967 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.461376934479 0.414875509568 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0301292692915 0.0530846634433 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388960510492 0.40443939384 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399956047398 0.0528353158467 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.26048565121 329% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 3.1766004415 283% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.2958057395 136% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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