The infrastructure and faculty are the core component of any university. It determines the strength and vision of the university. I disagree with the statement that it is more important for the universities to invest in infrastructure and physical plant than to invest in keeping the faculty satisfied. There is the following reason, will explain in the essay.
To begin with, the universities are the ocean of knowledge, it reflects the wisdom of rational thinking of a society or nation. The universities always play a major role in the success of many countries, for example, Oxford and Cambridge in Britain, Harvard and MIIT in the USA. For a university, it is important to maintain their infrastructure and faculty level, and there should be a balance in the budget allocation. However, faculty reflects the strength of their wisdom and it is always necessary to always satisfied them. The faculty, deliver their wisdom to the students and shape them into a great citizen of the country. Therefore, It is more important to the administration of the university to satisfy their faculty members. For example, the University of Queensland does not carry a great infrastructure, however, they spend a lot of budget to the welfare of their faculty.
Moreover, for a good teaching environment, it is necessary that the teacher should away from all the worries. The teacher should be away from financial as well administrative stress, only this way he can give his 100% to the university. For example, In the Melbourne University, most of the teachers are not happy with their salary and the kind of administrative stress they are facing. And few of them are planning to switch their job from a Melbourne university to another university, although Melbourne university has great infrastructure and spending lot of money in it. Due to the faculties' problem, lots of students are facing problems with their studies and the main motto of the university is also affected.
Finally, in a QS ranking of the best university, the faculty’s satisfaction is also a key component, which determines the ranking of the university. Therefore, it is necessary for the university to take care of their faculty and to invest more toward the welfare of faculty in comparing to the infrastructure.
In conclusion, faculties are more important than infrastructure and university should address this issue. In this way, they can maintain the quality of the education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faculties'' or 'faculty's'?
Suggestion: faculties'; faculty's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'faculties'' or 'faculty's'?
Suggestion: faculties'; faculty's
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 30.3222958057 204% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1373.03311258 150% => OK
No of words: 400.0 270.72406181 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.135 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1359169313 2.5805825403 122% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 419.366225166 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3647895752 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772717719271 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293244222651 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223394220192 0.0662205650399 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048329676994 0.162205337803 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206713153868 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 63.6247240618 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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