The passage states about the three methods which can be used to solve the problem of declying frog population. But, the lecturer talks about various problems or negative consequences associated with the each mothod.
Firstly, the passage states that if the laws prohibit farmers from using harmful pesticides near frog population, it would significantly reduce the harm pesticides cause to frogs. However, the lecturer states that most of the farmers use pesticides to their crops for better growth. If they stop using pesticides then there will be higher chances of crop failure. If law is enforced on the one area then they become jealous with other areas' farmers.
Secondly, the passage claims that antifungal medication and treatments can be applied with heat to protect sensitive frog populations from infection. But, the lecturer says that the treatment and medicines need to be applied on individual frog. It is very complicated task because we have to capture each frog and apply the medication. Also, We have to apply on each new generation frogs. So it is very complicated and complex task.
FInally, according to the passage frog habitats are threatened by human activites, including excessive water use or the draining of wetlands to make them suitable for development. In contrast, the lecturer opines that the global warming is main factor behind it. It is draining many wetlands and because of it many species became extinct.
- Tidal PowerTechnology is available to exploit the potential energy formed by tides for the generation of electrical energy. The basic structure is a barrage or dam built across a river estuary or at the mouth of a bay. This dam is similar to that used in 73
- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 70
- Nation should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed 41
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 85
- Do you think that television programs, movies, and video games influence young people's behavior? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ences associated with the each mothod. Firstly, the passage states that if the ...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cides to their crops for better growth. If they stop using pesticides then there w...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...will be higher chances of crop failure. If law is enforced on the one area then th...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndly, the passage claims that antifungal medication and treatments can be applied...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is very complicated and complex task. FInally, according to the passage frog h...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use or the draining of wetlands to make them suitable for development. In contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22317596567 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6813079308 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0675450117 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423585898152 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128564310381 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101022328292 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226851927084 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568643395151 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.