TPO 49
The reading specifies that there are three answers explain how the humpback whale navigate. However, the professor explains that this points are unconvincing and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the humpback whales are intelligent and they have a complex brain. Also, they have a abstract system of sensory such as the night sky orientation. Hence, wales use sky to navigate. Conversely, the professor opposes the idea by saying that there are no connection between orientation and cognitive ability. Ducks also have an average cognitive and they do not use stars for orientation. Since, they are born they have this ability which is instinct. Therefore, whale which have this feature do not use star for navigation.
Second, the author stated that humpback migrate in a straight lines for long distance. Therefore, they should use some external object or force and since they cannot rely on land features, they rely on stars at night. Nevertheless, the lecturer asserts that whale are sensitive to earth magnative. Thus, it is possible that they use earth for navigation instead if sky.
Third, whales exhibit an unusual behavior known as spy-hooping. They floating straight up for minutes at a time and in that time their heads are looking upward and looking to stars for navigation. In contrast, the professor contradicts this point reasoning that sharks have this behavior but they do not look at sky or migrate to other places. Therefore, they do not use it for navigation and it is not prove the point whale look to sky.
- TPO 40.Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 60
- TPO 32 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole 85
- TPO 49. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site. 80
- TPO 28 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y have a complex brain. Also, they have a abstract system of sensory such as the ...
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Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they do not use stars for orientation. Since, they are born they have this ability w...
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Line 4, column 403, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
...not use it for navigation and it is not prove the point whale look to sky.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, thus, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 258.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03488372093 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61554396793 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531007751938 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7747486378 49.2860985944 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.4117647059 110.228320801 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 21.698381199 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.27373068433 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526840222712 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175188340209 0.0996497079465 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808197362007 0.0662205650399 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315127538842 0.162205337803 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956166284209 0.0443174109184 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.42419426049 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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