The reading and the lecturer both are about the how humpback whales navigate when they migrate long distances. The reading provides some evidence that shows humpback use stars to navigate. In contrast, the lecturer casts doubt on the reasons are mentioned in the reading by providing three outstanding reasons.
Firstly, the author claims that humpback whales are intelligent animals due to the level of complexity of their brains; therefore, they utilize their cognitive abilities to look night sky for orientation. On the other hand, the professor rejects this point. He states that there is no real connection between intelligence and cognitive ability. For instance, some animals such as ducks have the cognitive ability since they born, but they have an average level of brain complexity and intelligence. Hence, there is an unreliable relation between these two mattes.
Secondly, the reading says that humpback whales migrate in straight lines and they just change their routes when they sense some barriers; also, there are no landmarks in the ocean to help them in navigation. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this point and he believes that the humpback whale’s body produces a substance called bio-magnetic. This substance makes the humpback whale able to sense the magnetic field of Earth as do some birds. Thus, humpback whales may use magnetic filed rather than stars in the sky for navigation.
Finally, the reading believes that humpback whales have an unusual behavior called spy-hopping which humpback whales look upward for minutes at a time. They behave like this in order to see stars in the sky. Nonetheless, the lecturer challenges this reason. He says that other marine animals such as sharks have this behavior, however, sharks never migrate. Sharks just do this for looking prey in sunny days, not in nights. Therefore, this explanation is a poor speculation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...reading and the lecturer both are about the how humpback whales navigate when they migr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29900332226 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65800248453 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5306317929 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6111111111 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06452816374 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46865897862 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134874213897 0.0996497079465 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106481451743 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278777893031 0.162205337803 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398939684116 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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